Rough Cut Feedback Response

Overall, our feedback of our rough cut was positive, such as the violin scene, the framing and the focusing in and out of our shot. However, there was some small mistakes such as the lip syncing in the second verse as the female artist is out of sync and sings a bit too quickly. Also, we have very little shots of the violinist which is shown a bit in the intro of our music video and a minimum on the hook/anchor. We would address both these problems by:

1. Correcting and perfecting the lip syncing on the second verse. Therefore, we may have to change the speed of some shots to match the lip syncing.
2. Add more shots of the violinist in the end of our music video which were planning to do so as our narrative was structured this way.
3. Also, I believe there is too much similar shot of the female artist in the second verse therefore I believe we should include some narrative to balance this out with the performance.